Elliot Forsman has a new PI business with his partner Rivka Goldstein. When his father is killed and the police set the case aside he decides to go after the murderer himself. He gets involved with Dr Banik of Biovonix – a pharmaceutical firm – and with the mercenaries who work for him, putting his own life, and Rivka’s, in danger. He enlists the help of an old friend, Rayce Nolan, an expert on guns and knives and on how to outwit an enemy.
Elliot is an interesting person, grieving for the death of his wife, starting up his new PI business and trying to find out why his father died. He is a courageous man, determined and focused.
The characters in this novel are uniformly good, believable and layered. The narrative drive is compelling and the dialogue is realistic. However it seems strange that the book is called “Ogrodnik” the name of one of the characters. There is a hint of why at the end but there are many sections of the book where Ogrodnik doesn’t feature at all. Elliot is the main character and he holds the narrative thread together although there are times when the book seems to lose direction.
Technically there is a problem with capital letters. They are used indiscriminately in all the wrong places:
“. . . Rivka Replied . . . “like this, Said Rivka . . .”
Several words are used incorrectly:
“After I declined captain Brebouef for a couple of years . . . ”
There are some awkward sentences:
” . . . and the soldier spoke in a loud voice “Milos. Milos. Are you here?” In a thick eastern European accent as he walked down . . . ”
And a very strange simile:
” . . . beside the couch was Rivka’s Smith & Wesson, lying on the floor like a dead fish.”
Overall the book is really good and very enjoyable. It deserves 4 stars but the whole would work much better if the material was organised and had a further edit.
Published on booksandpals.com, amazon.com and goodreads.com Feb. ’17